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 Saten Kagami- The Spirit King

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PostSubject: Saten Kagami- The Spirit King   Saten Kagami- The Spirit King EmptyTue Sep 28, 2010 11:31 am

General Information
Name:Saten Kagami
--Nickname: Mirror
----Special Title: Spirit King
Gender: Female
Physical Age: 17
Actual Age: Unknown
Weight: 100 lbs
Height: 5'4 ft
Race: Unknown
Rank: Soul King


Looks: Saten is a beautiful young woman who wears a custom shinigami uniform. She wears a long red scarf and two wristbands. She can also be seen with her robe similar to those worn by Shinigami Captains.

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Personality: Smart and resourceful when the time calls for it, but can act flirtatious and fool around with others. She is incredibly keen when it comes to her intellect and can easy find patterns and weak points in her opponents attacks. In battle she is calm and collected, but will sometimes let loose her anger. She is friendly and likes to help others with problems they may face, she also likes to hide the fact that she is the Soul King, for personal reasons.

Life Information
Day of Birth: Unknown
Day of Death: Unkown
Place of Birth: Soul Society
Place of Living: Soul Society
Group of Alliance: Soul Society

Role Playing Sample: (Note: This is from another RP I was in, it was a Naruto RP)
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Picture[s]: See Looks^

Background Information

History: Born into the Royal Family with exceptional spiritual pressure, Saten was considered the strongest out of all ever produced. Despite the problems with her gender, Saten was more powerful than any of the other participants for the throne.

A flaw that other members of the family tried to exploit was her lack of Zanpakuto. Many of her opponents attempted to defeat her, but with her extensive knowledge she was able to fight against extremely powerful opponents without a weapon. She was also incredibly strong and fast, a natural in unarmed combat.

When Saten was tried for her ability to take her part as Soul King, she proved that she was more than able. She was capable of caring for the well being of the people, able to fight off powerful opponents and was able to end disputes without violence or heavy casualties.

Saten was challenged by the other members of the Royal Family for rights of claiming the throne through illegal matches and Saten never found her equal. She continued to prove herself time and time again as an idea leader for Soul Society.

Saten leaves her throne from time to time and takes the time to learn how the people are fairing, making sure to give them aid if they need it.

Hollow Powers:

Cero: Saten's cero is formed from her fingers. The speed of the attack is faster than most Cero, but slower than a Bala. The strength is enough to defeat a Cero Oscuras.

Cero Oscuras: Saten's more powerful version of Cero, her Oscuras is more powerful than her Cero comparable to how powerful an ordinary Oscuras is compared to a regular Cero

Cero Metralleta: Saten uses her sword tip to unleash a powerful barrage of Ceros simultaneously that, because of their density and grouping, can appear to fuse together into one large Cero blast. She is able to change the direction of this attack during firing, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

Gran Rey Cero: Another more powerful version of her Cero. Saten's Gran Rey Cero is more powerful than his Cero in the same way a normal Gran Rey is more powerful than a normal Cero.

Gemelos Sonido: Saten places a few extra steps during hyper speed movement and creates quasi-clones. Saten can create dozens of these clones.

High-Speed Regeneration: Saten can quickly regenerate any part of her body, however she is unable to heal her brain or her internal organs.

Secret/Special Ability: Saten's special ability is that she can copy any Kido, Cero, or Zanpakuto Kido-type ability, and use it as her own, however she is not immune to the power and force of the attack and she is only allowed to copy one from an individual. This doesn't apply to illusions or physical abilities. (For example, if one were to fire a Cero at her, she would absorb it and use it against her opponent. However if Byakuya Kuchiki were to use Senbonzakura against her, she would be unable to copy the ability and would be susceptible to the attacks. If Sosuke Aizen were to use his illusions, then if the conditions for the power were met, then she would be affected by the illusions) She also cannot copy attacks from super humans, quincy or bounts.

So far she has copied several high powered techniques from different opponents in the past, these include:

Lanza Del Relampago: Saten creates a javelin-like weapon using her spiritual power, which she can use as a projectile or as a physical weapon. When thrown, it produces an incredibly-destructive explosion on impact, which dwarfs the fortress of Las Noches in height. Saten prefers to not use the attack at close range, most likely because the resulting blast would damage herself as well as Las Noches. While she can use these spears in rapid succession, she has difficulty controlling their trajectory. Saten is also able to use this attack as a blade, and she can use it to either disintegrate material upon impact, or to cut.

Los Lobos: Saten is able to summon a pack of grey wolves seemingly numbering in the hundreds. The wolves are controlled verbally by Saten and will chase down the enemy with the intent to cling via a bite. Upon biting the enemy or getting close enough, the wolves erupt in explosions of varying size and power. They're capable of being very destructive, as when one exploded, it destroyed a large area of Karakura town in a huge column of explosion which dwarfed the surrounding buildings. Saten seems to be able to summon them without limit, thus overwhelming the enemy with their sheer numbers. They are like flames, as they reform from any harm done to them (even if they are literally cut into pieces) to continue their attack without pause.

Kuroi Getsuga Tensho: At the instant of the slash, Saten uses spiritual energy and releases highly condensed spiritual energy at the tip of her weapon, magnifying the attack and then flies forward. This attack takes the form of a crescent moon or in the shape of a wave. The Getsuga Tenshō is a powerful technique with great force, capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. Saten has used this technique in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path.

Hyoten Hyakaso: Saten opens up a huge hole in the clouds through which a large amount of snow falls down on to her opponent. As the snow comes into contact with the opponent, ice flowers sprout all over their body, instantly trapping them in a pillar of ice. It is claimed that when the last of the 100 petals falls, the life of the one who touched it will be over.

Air Blades: Saten unleashes powerful, transparent blades of wind that can cut through menos with ease and can cut like blades even against Hierro.

Ruriro Kujaku: Upon physical contact, Saten quickly and violently absorbs her opponents spiritual pressure.

Cascada: Saten launches a rushing surge of water at her enemy. The torrent of high pressure water is large enough to cover several town blocks.

Sogyo no Kotowari: Saten is able to absorb an opponent's energy attacks through her left hand and directs the attack through her body where it strengthens and accelerates the attack faster than it was originally fired and reverses its original course firing the same attack from the right hand, making it much more difficult for the opponent to dodge. The entire process happens so fast that the attack looks as if it originally came from Saten.

Ennetsu Jigoku: This ability creates seven or more immense pillars of flame that surround an area. The intent of this technique is to trap the opponent in the caged inferno and destroy them. The power of this technique is lethal enough to destroy everyone caught in its vicinity, even Saten herself.

Miscellaneous Powers and Abilities

Immense Physical Strength: Strong enough to blow away a large portion of the Las Noches dome with the wake of a single hand motion, Saten is capable of incredible feats of strength. Most Hierro give way to Saten's strength and can even puncture any pre-release Hierro and most post-release of an Espada with her hands in relative ease.

Master Strategist: As the Soul King, has shown herself to be a capable leader. Repeatedly, Saten has shown to be insightful and crafty, quickly capable of understanding any situation that presents itself and adjust to it effectively. She can take advantage of any flaw she sees in her opponents, no matter how small.

Colossal Spiritual Pressure: Saten's spiritual pressure is so great, if she were to unleash her spiritual pressure she could potentially kill anyone below trecera espada. She is capable of releasing a large amount of spiritual energy and blowing away attacks with destructive force. She uses it as an armor as well, making it impossible for anyone but powerful opponents to harm her. Her spiritual pressure is immense and can go over long distances when she unleashes it. If she were to condense her spiritual pressure too much, it could possibly become solid, thus it is expanded to distances so to not become too obvious of her power. If she were to let it out, people could claim that her spiritual pressure was like an ocean above the sky, extremely dense and powerful, and when condensed to a smaller place like a city, it could even block the sky and sun. The coloring of her spiritual pressure is black and blue.

Hyper Speed Combatant: Saten is capable of moving at amazing speeds, so fast that she can create several afterimages with her rapid movement.

Kido Master: Saten has demonstrated the ability to use various high-level Kidō at full power with complete control, including a level 99 Bakudō and level 88 Hadō spell, both without incantation and even without saying the name. She has also shown very extensive knowledge of forbidden techniques such as time and space manipulation, and is also capable of using the skills of Hachigen of the Vizard. The Kido power is more powerful than regular due to her powerful spiritual pressure.

Master Weapon User: Capable of fighting several high level opponents with a sword, spear or any other form of weapon, utilizing skilled movements and pinpoint attacks.

Hakuda Master: Even without a sword, Saten can take down most opponents using only hand to hand combat combined with great physical strength. With her abilities she can obliterate her opponent in a single attack, with nothing but he bare hands.


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PostSubject: Re: Saten Kagami- The Spirit King   Saten Kagami- The Spirit King EmptyTue Sep 28, 2010 11:43 am

Way to NOT totally copy canon character abilities
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PostSubject: Re: Saten Kagami- The Spirit King   Saten Kagami- The Spirit King EmptyWed Sep 29, 2010 3:19 am

Thats her ability, and it's allowed. I wish you the best of luck in any future fights we have. Character Aprroved.
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PostSubject: Re: Saten Kagami- The Spirit King   Saten Kagami- The Spirit King EmptyMon Oct 04, 2010 3:05 am

Quote :
Kido Master: Saten has demonstrated the ability to use various high-level Kidō at full power with complete control, including a level 99 Bakudō and level 88 Hadō spell, both without incantation and even without saying the name. She has also shown very extensive knowledge of forbidden techniques such as time and space manipulation, and is also capable of using the skills of Hachigen of the Vizard. The Kido power is more powerful than regular due to her powerful spiritual pressure.

No, you're editing that. No way you'll have the ability to do THAT without incantation. You're going to be like everyone else. You'll say the incantation. You'll say the number. It'll be normal strength. No you cant use Hachigen's techniques, those are SPECIFIC to him. Edit that.

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Lanza Del Relampago: Saten creates a javelin-like weapon using her spiritual power, which she can use as a projectile or as a physical weapon. When thrown, it produces an incredibly-destructive explosion on impact, which dwarfs the fortress of Las Noches in height. Saten prefers to not use the attack at close range, most likely because the resulting blast would damage herself as well as Las Noches. While she can use these spears in rapid succession, she has difficulty controlling their trajectory. Saten is also able to use this attack as a blade, and she can use it to either disintegrate material upon impact, or to cut.

Los Lobos: Saten is able to summon a pack of grey wolves seemingly numbering in the hundreds. The wolves are controlled verbally by Saten and will chase down the enemy with the intent to cling via a bite. Upon biting the enemy or getting close enough, the wolves erupt in explosions of varying size and power. They're capable of being very destructive, as when one exploded, it destroyed a large area of Karakura town in a huge column of explosion which dwarfed the surrounding buildings. Saten seems to be able to summon them without limit, thus overwhelming the enemy with their sheer numbers. They are like flames, as they reform from any harm done to them (even if they are literally cut into pieces) to continue their attack without pause.

Kuroi Getsuga Tensho: At the instant of the slash, Saten uses spiritual energy and releases highly condensed spiritual energy at the tip of her weapon, magnifying the attack and then flies forward. This attack takes the form of a crescent moon or in the shape of a wave. The Getsuga Tenshō is a powerful technique with great force, capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. Saten has used this technique in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path.

Hyoten Hyakaso: Saten opens up a huge hole in the clouds through which a large amount of snow falls down on to her opponent. As the snow comes into contact with the opponent, ice flowers sprout all over their body, instantly trapping them in a pillar of ice. It is claimed that when the last of the 100 petals falls, the life of the one who touched it will be over.

Air Blades: Saten unleashes powerful, transparent blades of wind that can cut through menos with ease and can cut like blades even against Hierro.

Ruriro Kujaku: Upon physical contact, Saten quickly and violently absorbs her opponents spiritual pressure.

Cascada: Saten launches a rushing surge of water at her enemy. The torrent of high pressure water is large enough to cover several town blocks.

Sogyo no Kotowari: Saten is able to absorb an opponent's energy attacks through her left hand and directs the attack through her body where it strengthens and accelerates the attack faster than it was originally fired and reverses its original course firing the same attack from the right hand, making it much more difficult for the opponent to dodge. The entire process happens so fast that the attack looks as if it originally came from Saten.

Ennetsu Jigoku: This ability creates seven or more immense pillars of flame that surround an area. The intent of this technique is to trap the opponent in the caged inferno and destroy them. The power of this technique is lethal enough to destroy everyone caught in its vicinity, even Saten herself.

Idk why Zeek approved you. You're editing all that. Nope. You're not getting their abilities. You are by FAR overpowered due to this, and Zeek, you need to understand the reason im stepping in is because it has bene brought up many times on Serenity's chatbox as "BS".

Edit all that.

Edit how strong your character is, such as

Quote :
Immense Physical Strength: Strong enough to blow away a large portion of the Las Noches dome with the wake of a single hand motion, Saten is capable of incredible feats of strength. Most Hierro give way to Saten's strength and can even puncture any pre-release Hierro and most post-release of an Espada with her hands in relative ease.

Master Strategist: As the Soul King, has shown herself to be a capable leader. Repeatedly, Saten has shown to be insightful and crafty, quickly capable of understanding any situation that presents itself and adjust to it effectively. She can take advantage of any flaw she sees in her opponents, no matter how small.

Colossal Spiritual Pressure: Saten's spiritual pressure is so great, if she were to unleash her spiritual pressure she could potentially kill anyone below trecera espada. She is capable of releasing a large amount of spiritual energy and blowing away attacks with destructive force. She uses it as an armor as well, making it impossible for anyone but powerful opponents to harm her. Her spiritual pressure is immense and can go over long distances when she unleashes it. If she were to condense her spiritual pressure too much, it could possibly become solid, thus it is expanded to distances so to not become too obvious of her power. If she were to let it out, people could claim that her spiritual pressure was like an ocean above the sky, extremely dense and powerful, and when condensed to a smaller place like a city, it could even block the sky and sun. The coloring of her spiritual pressure is black and blue.

Hyper Speed Combatant: Saten is capable of moving at amazing speeds, so fast that she can create several afterimages with her rapid movement.

Master Weapon User: Capable of fighting several high level opponents with a sword, spear or any other form of weapon, utilizing skilled movements and pinpoint attacks.

Hakuda Master: Even without a sword, Saten can take down most opponents using only hand to hand combat combined with great physical strength. With her abilities she can obliterate her opponent in a single attack, with nothing but he bare hands.

Hollow Powers:

Cero: Saten's cero is formed from her fingers. The speed of the attack is faster than most Cero, but slower than a Bala. The strength is enough to defeat a Cero Oscuras.

Cero Oscuras: Saten's more powerful version of Cero, her Oscuras is more powerful than her Cero comparable to how powerful an ordinary Oscuras is compared to a regular Cero

Cero Metralleta: Saten uses her sword tip to unleash a powerful barrage of Ceros simultaneously that, because of their density and grouping, can appear to fuse together into one large Cero blast. She is able to change the direction of this attack during firing, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

Gran Rey Cero: Another more powerful version of her Cero. Saten's Gran Rey Cero is more powerful than his Cero in the same way a normal Gran Rey is more powerful than a normal Cero.

Gemelos Sonido: Saten places a few extra steps during hyper speed movement and creates quasi-clones. Saten can create dozens of these clones.

High-Speed Regeneration: Saten can quickly regenerate any part of her body, however she is unable to heal her brain or her internal organs. [/quote]

You cannot have that, you're the Spirit King. There is no way you'd be Spirit King (Or Queen) if you disobeyed the very laws your character has put in place. You will not have Hollow Powers, it'll illogical to your character, and your character is already vastly overpowered. Remove the hollow abilities.

Your looks, your history and RP Sample are NOT good enough for your position. Add much more to your looks and personality, because as of now, I can seeyou being a SEATED officer, NOT Spirit Queen.

OFFICALLY UNAPPROVED..Because of of now, you're simply nothing but an overpowered Mary Sue.
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PostSubject: Re: Saten Kagami- The Spirit King   Saten Kagami- The Spirit King EmptyMon Oct 04, 2010 5:52 am

And thus the creation of the Fuman Bitchslap
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PostSubject: Re: Saten Kagami- The Spirit King   Saten Kagami- The Spirit King EmptyTue Oct 05, 2010 7:23 am

That sounded really cool Josh, so despite it being irrelevent, it's staying :]
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